Online education is rapidly increasing in popularity. What has led to this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online learning compared to in-class instructions? Provide examples and explanations.
In recent years, it
becomes
increasingly common for people to participate in online learning. Wrong verb form
has become
This
is because the advanced development of technology leads to this
trend. I believe the advantages
are more significant than the drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are several advantages
of online learning. Firstly
, it is convenient, especially for someone who is also
working. For instance
, for some employees, learning through online classes becomes their choice when they are too busy with their work schedule. Moreover
, if the distance between their work's place is quite far from the university. A further
advantage is education is able to reach a wide range of communities. This
means, even
the community in remote areas are able to receive the same education as in the big city as long as the connection is stable.
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that even
On the other hand
, online learning also
has some disadvantages. The first drawback is some students might find it hard to focus when they also
do other tasks. In other words
, even though it can be done anywhere, it is much better for the learner to find a quiet place and set a time to focus on the class. Another problem that might arise is the communication between the teacher and the student might not effective
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be effective
due to
the time limit. This
means, unlike
studying directly in class, the students might not be able to discuss the subject with the teacher after the class is dismissed.
In conclusion, despite some problems Correct word choice
that, unlike
such
as hard to focus or the time limit of discussion, I believe the advantages
outweigh the drawbacks. Those advantages
include convenience and being able to reach a wide range of communities.Submitted by fitri.antoni on
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coherence cohesion
In the introduction, provide a clear thesis statement that directly addresses both parts of the essay prompt (reasons for the popularity of online learning and advantages/disadvantages compared to in-class instructions). Ensure a stronger conclusion that summarizes the main points and reinforces the thesis.
task achievement
Support the main points more effectively by providing specific examples and explanations to further illustrate the advantages and disadvantages of online learning. Consider expanding on the drawbacks by providing more detailed examples or addressing potential counterarguments.