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In many countries , people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. what are the reason for this? What could be done to solve this provblem?

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Recycing
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Recycling
waste
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such
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 as plastic and paper is not properly done by
people
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 all over the world. The causes of
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 problem seem to be a lack of
awareness
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 and inconvenience; each of these issues should be addressed separately.
Fristly
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, One of the main reasons is that
people
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's knowledge of recycling is inferior due to a non-popular official recycling
program
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 or a lack of education about basic environmental science. Some countries'
waste
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 management protocols have only recently or never been implemented, so many
people
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 in those countries may not understand how to recycle domestic
waste
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 or what the benefits of the
program
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 are.
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, most
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recycling
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 programs are not convenient;
for example
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, some collecting
centers
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 are located a long distance from the residence area, so
people
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 have to spend time and money to deliver their
reclying
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recycling
 items. So some
people
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 find that recycling is a difficult task. Public
awareness
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 campaigns should be implemented across the country to encourage
people
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 to recycle more.Which should be included in basic science knowledge of the environment, what are the negative impacts of domestic
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, and aside from that, the
waste
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 recycling lesson should be mandatory for schoolchildren.
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, the government can properly organize recycling projects,
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 as establishing more
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 collection
centers
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 near residences to collect
waste
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 more efficiently.
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, if a mobile app can be launched for the
waste
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 collection
program
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, the younger generation can engage with the
program
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. To conclude, lack of
awareness
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 and inconvenience are the main reason
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people
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 do not actively engage with their
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recycling
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,
however
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, if
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the govenment
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govenment
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government
provide
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 facilities for
reclying
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recycling
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relying
people
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 may tend to
reclycle
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recycle
 the
wast
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waste
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.
In addition
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, social
awareness
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 programs can help encourage recycling.
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