You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

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Dear Mr Sam, I am to writing

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letter to express my apologies because unable to start my work due to my knee injury on 12

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2023.

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, I would like to thank you for that Job which you offer me but unfortunately, I was in an accident in a car when I cross the road

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Sunday.

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, I was admitted to the hospital by people who lived in that area. Due to that fact, I was broken my knee and still I lay on the bed. As per the doctor's ,advice I have to take bed rest for another couple of weeks. As per the Job offer I have to start my work on the day after tomorrow. But I am afraid unable to start my duty due to that injury. Because still I could not walk properly. But I was taken by treatment regularly I hope I would be recovered soon.

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, I would like to make a kind request to you which is to change my employment start date to 01

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2021. It would be a great help for me because

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Job is really necessary for me. Thanks for your understanding and support Yours Sincerely, Asanka.

asankabiz84Mon Jan 09 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

199 words

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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

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