Analysis of characteristics and HIV risk factors among student MSM aged 15-19 in two cities in China

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study aims to learn about the characteristics of student MSM in China by analyzing relevant factors that may put them at risk of HIV infection, to provide evidence for targeted intervention. The online sampling used the standard respondent-driven sampling (RDS) method, with recruitment support from community-based organizations (CBOs) in Tianjin and Guangzhou. Multivariate logistic regression models were performed to identify factors correlated with multiple HIV risky

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. The SAS software was used for data analysis. A total of 449 subjects were recruited in

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study, including 206 in Tianjin and 243 in Guangzhou. The multiple HIV risky

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of student MSM, in many cases, were found to correlate with parental or friends’ awareness of their same-sex sexual

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, with some geographical differences. Educational materials and teaching styles need to be tailored to serve students of different ages, grades, and different risk levels. Informing and engaging parents with appropriate knowledge and skills will

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be critical in supporting their children to make safer and healthier choices in their adolescence.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Analysis of characteristics and HIV risk factors among student MSM aged 15-19 in two cities in China

Include an introduction and conclusion

Increasing the petrol price is the best way to reducing traffic and pollution problems. agree and disagree.

In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that spending money and living for today makes more sense than saving for the future. Do you agree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?