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Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nuclear
weapons
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 are powerful
weapons
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 with massive destruction to all living
beings
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 and the environment. The majority of them argue that there are positive effects on the
world
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, but I wholeheartedly oppose it.
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this
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 thesis will propound the fact that it has an immense effect on all living
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 and it must be completely prohibited.
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 with, nuclear
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 are the highest destructive superpower
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 in the
world
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, with the potential for immense damage.
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, the United States detonated two atomic bombs in the Japanese cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki ten thousand
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 died and a hundred thousand
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 got injured and poisoned. Still, there are long-lasting effects on the health of
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 living in the affected areas.
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 that it is a huge threat to
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 peace and stability.
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, some
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 believe that nuclear
weapons
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 as a hindrance to war to make other countries afraid, but it encourages to start of another nuclear war,
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that is
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 impossible to count the damage. The use of the atomic bomb could potentially lead to wiping out all living
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 ( global holocaust) and breaking down international laws and peace. Development and experimentation on nuclear bombs are extremely costly and harmful.
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, if nuclear
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 are falling into the hands of terrorists that will be the end of the whole human species. To conclude that there is no argument nuclear bombs must be completely prohibited from the
world
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 for the survival of human
beings
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. The international law community should be vigilant and powerful to stop the usage and experiment of nuclear
weapons
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 as a precaution for human survival.
Submitted by Yasangima Suhashinee Bandara on

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