More and more wild animals are on the verfe if extinction and other are on the endanger list. what are the reasons for this. what can be done to solve this problem.
There are so many varieties of
animals
across the earth and as we know in
a different kind of environment means there will be different kinds of Change preposition
apply
animals
. as example penguins are supposed to live in cold areas such
as the north pole and they can't live in a hot environments
Correct the article-noun agreement
hot environments
a hot environment
such
as desert or other tropic areas.
but now their existence is under threat. there are some reasons why this
thing can happen. global warming is one example of why animals
are on endangered lists. so many forests were felled causing animal's natural habitats to be gone and slowly some types of animals
cant
survive and die. global warming Correct your spelling
can't
also
causes the original temperature of the earth to rise, and someplace such
as the north/south poles start to melt. this
thing can cause some animals
who live there cannot adapt and they could go.
by seeing the reasons above there are some ways we can repair this
situation. we should build animal conservation, where animals
are protected there. conservations could also
be a place to breed varietiesChange preposition
of
animals
to multiply their existence. we also
need to rebuild their habitats and this
might be the best option to secure wild animal life. by greening their living area that destroyed
by humankind, Add a missing verb
was destroyed
animals
can live there safely and more naturally like they suppose to live.
to conclude, there are so many reasons that can cause wild animal existence is
gone but Change the verb form
to be
human
can still save their life. we can try to make conservation or Add an article
a human
the human
to
rebuild their natural habitats. even though it could take a long time but we can still increase their chance to live.Fix the infinitive
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
