In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
There
has
been significant developments. In technology related to agriculture over the past few years. Change the verb form
have
However
, poverty and the lack of food
sources is still a
worldwide Correct article usage
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problem
. There are several reasons why this
happens.
The first
reason why many people
around the world is
still starving is because of the unbalanced distribution of Change the verb form
are
food
products
. Many restaurants in advanced countries
produce lots of food
waste every year. In fact, many products
are being thrown away in these countries
because it is not consumed and out
of date. An effective way of dealing with Add a missing verb
are out
this
problem
can be equally distributing food
products
and crops among the countries
. This
can also
be done by shipping leftover, or excess food
products
and donating them to poorer countries
.
Another reason why advances in agriculture is
not solving the worldwide Change the verb form
are
problem
might be because the advances are made in unrelated fields. For example
, scientists are more interested in GMO
and making fruits tastier than in growing crops in areas that have harsh climates. Fix the agreement mistake
GMOs
This
can be the reason why people
living in dry climates or cold places fail to obtain food
even though the
technology is advancing. A solution for Correct article usage
apply
this
can be paying more attention to different fields of research. scientists and companies should focus more on providing technical support to starving people
than to
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on
fabricating
various types of fruits and vegetables.
In conclusion, Change the form of the verb
fabricate
although
there are many improvements made in agriculture, many people
around the globe still lack of
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apply
food
source
. Fix the agreement mistake
sources
This
is mainly because of problems in food
distribution and indifference in
these problems. Change preposition
to
This
problem
can be solved by donating unconsumed food
products
,
and doing more research on growing crops in harsh conditions.Remove the comma
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
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- however
- although
- even though
- despite