Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by

majority

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the majority

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of individuals that a feeling of

contest

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the contest

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should be aroused in

children

, whilst others disagree and argue that youths who are being instructed how to

collaberate

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collaborate

become more beneficial humans. From my

prespective

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perspective

, the combination of the two is the best

way

forward. Based on the above statement, I am going to discuss

both

notions as well as highlight the reason for my point of view.

To begin

with, there are some communities who assume that a sense of competition in

children

should be propelled. They believe that

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this

way

they will be able to incorporate achievement into their life.

As a result

of

this

, they might become

a confident adults

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confident adults

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. As an illustration of

this

, in one research it was indicated that encouraging a feeling of rivalry is the sole route to reach accomplishment.

On the other hand

, there are others who assert that

children

should be taught to cooperate,

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a result of

this

, they will become more productive

human

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.

Besides

, they will possess the ability to work in

teamworks

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teamwork

team works

Steamworks

.

Furthermore

, they will be able to establish

a rewarding friendship bonds

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a rewarding friendship bond

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. In my opinion, having a balance between

both

of these notions would be the best

way

to offer.

As by

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performing

both

of these ways ,they might achieve their level of success as well as manage a good working partnership. In conclusion,

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it is considered by some individuals a sense of competition should be encouraged in

children

, there are others who claim

otherwise

and tell that in order to become more beneficial adults it is essential to be taught how to cooperate. Despite these arguments, I believe that the combination of

both

is the best

way

forward.