In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. do this development have more adavantages or disadvantages?

#future #robots #jobs #humans #development #adavantages

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

It is irrefutable that robots have beneficial effects

for

Change preposition

show examples

our lives, but it has some negative sides, too. In the near future, machines will take place of humans. In

this

Linking Words

essay, I will discuss both sides of

this

Linking Words

statement and give a logical conclusion. There are a number of pros

Change preposition

show examples

this

Linking Words

development.

To begin

Linking Words

with, plenty of adults will not need to work since robots will do their

works

Fix the agreement mistake

work

show examples

For instance

Linking Words

, in the past, there were a lot of humans who worked at the factories;

however

Linking Words

, today, machines do

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

most of the work and in the future, they can do all jobs.

Consequently

Linking Words

, society will be happy because they will be able to spend time

Change preposition

with

show examples

their hobbies, friends as well as

families

Fix the agreement mistake

family

show examples

and it can lead to better

realitionships

Correct your spelling

relationships

among family members and friends.

Nevertheless

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

process

also

Linking Words

has

some

Correct quantifier usage

apply

show examples

certain cons.

First

Linking Words

of all,

this

Linking Words

can lead to obesity as well as laziness as people will have nothing to do.

For example

Linking Words

, nowadays, there are several works that

requires

Change the verb form

require

show examples

physical activities;

therefore

Linking Words

, humans can stay active during the day.

Nonetheless

Linking Words

, when the robots do these works

instead

Linking Words

of the workers, they will stay at home all

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

day and consume food.

As a result

Linking Words

, they will gain weight and will be obese as well as lazy. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that even though there are some drawbacks

such

Linking Words

as laziness as well as obesity, it has an extremely positive effect on people's social life since it gives people a lot of recreational time for doing their

favorite

Change the spelling

favourite

show examples

hobbies.

Submitted by a.mammadzada on Mon Jan 09 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

14
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

268 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5.5
band
More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are some possible solutions?
People in developing countries are increasingly buying cars for the first time. The most common problem is, without being aware of road safety, people buy their first cars, and the solution would be not permitting people to buy cars, without learning driving properly.
7
band
Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?
Management of societies to control populations are dynamic, hence changes are constantly required in order to guarantee equality. Then, some proponents argue that governments are in charge of improvements among communities, while opponents believe that people are also responsible for them. I staunchly agree that either governors or individuals must take care of their countries by working as peers. In my contention, I support both ideas.
4.5
band
Some people consider prices as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (eg. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree
There is no doubt that these days some people consider prices as most important thing to think about when buying products or services. The question is, what is my opinion? do I agree or not? I'm going to clarify my point of view and draw my own conclusion.
7.5
band
Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Many individuals are of the opinion that cities should permit spaces for graffiti while others argue that it should be prohibited. This essay will discuss both perspectives, along with presenting my opinion.
<4
band
Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
An increasing number of car owners over the past thirty years caused the world in a big traffic jam. I think this statement is 50% true. The main reason is whether many cities in the world are now having a traffic jam should depend on how big and crowded the city is. For example, city like Taipei always has traffic jams at the peak hour, but in Hualien city, there won’t be any traffic jams due to the smaller population.That’s why I’ll say the Topic is not 100% true because it should be specific cities, especially in capital, are facing traffic issues.

In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. do this development have more adavantages or disadvantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are some possible solutions?

Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?

Some people consider prices as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (eg. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree

Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?