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It is currently believed that children's behavior and misconduct is due to the lack of strict discipline and punishment applied by parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays,
children
 are not behaving properly because of missing discipline and punishment by caregivers . Personally, I completely agree with
this
 given statement because of various reasons that I would like to discuss
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. To commence with some factors why
children
 misbehave due to parental leniency.
First
 of all,
children
 have a choice to live independently in their homes . Even they can do whatever they want ,
instead
 of
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worrying about other family members . As a consequence, juveniles sometimes start to speak bad words about their
parents
.
Secondly
 , some pupils do not listen to their teachers because their
parents
 have not strictly disciplined them at home.
Also
 , they do not follow any rules in their class and disobey their mentor.
Moreover
, family members are in love with their offspring and they do not want to punish them or bother them for their
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.
In
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results
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,
children
 learn nothing about good or bad things in their lives and
also
 commit major crimes without any worry of punishment.
Finally
 ,
parents
 are not teaching their kids any moral values during their childhood because they are busy
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 their own
career
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As a result
,
children
 are leading
life
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 without manners. In conclusion , I strongly believe that
parents
 are mainly responsible for the bad habits
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 their
children
.
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