Some people today have argued that countries should interfere less in the affairs of other nations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The foreign

policy

of any

country

is an essential part of establishing good relations with other states and providing peace and prosperity within the

country

. There is a point that countries have to intervene

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the

policy

of other states less often. I partially agree with

this

idea and will support my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

First

of all, each

country

always acts in the best interest of the nation and knows better than others what is necessary for its citizens. Interference in the

policy

of one state by the other may lead to dire consequences,

such

as hostility, violence and war.

As a

result

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there are closed borders, restrictions and limitations on

commodity

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commodities

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and moving,

unstable

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economy and high prices.

Furthermore

, it inevitably has an impact on the population and unfortunately, these are the innocent people who suffer in

this

case, losing the ability to live a normal life constantly being in fear and horror.

On the other hand

, sometimes meddling in the matters of the other nation might be beneficial.

For instance

, countries with

well developed

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economies help those which go through crises and have no funds to allocate for

development

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and maintenance of the vital spheres of life. Helping those

which

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it need facilitates the establishment of good relations between nations,

prevention

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of poverty, terrorism and other present-day problems. In conclusion,

although

each

country

is independent,

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its own rights and vision of sustainable

policy

, sometimes external interference is necessary in order to prevent collapse.