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Stress is now a major problem in maby countries around the world. What are some of the fact in modern society that causes this stress and can we reduce it.

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In
this
 modern era,
people
 are rushing in their busy schedules to achieve their goal lead to mental stress. According to a recent survey, more than 67% of
people
 are facing
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 health
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.
This
 essay is going to see outline the causes and solutions to
this
problem
 before coming to a final conclusion.
A paramount
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a rapid pace of development,
more
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 workload with
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 deadlines for the
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 benefits.
As a result
, employee giving their full potential to complete the work
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day and night lead to
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mental stress.
Moreover
, education plays a vital role in children's
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.
Therefore
, parents and teachers are putting
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enormous
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acedemic
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academic
 records.Needless to say, all these points stand in good stead. Steps to deal with
this
problem
 are many but the most
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significant
 one are not complicated but practical and accessible.
Firstly
,
people
 can take
short
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vacation
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vacations
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 from work to relax their
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minds
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 and find a new job in
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 environment.
Furthermore
, parents should
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 children to give their best
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instead
 of forcing them.
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participating in
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sport
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the
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mental stress.
Thus
, if
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 reasons are taken
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appropriately
,
this
problem
 may find
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 solution. In recapitulation,
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 causes
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attention
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 and action to protect the
people
. Government should implements action in the education system to give priority to
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practical
 knowledge than
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theoretical
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