In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

Developing technology and gagging new knowledge and exploring the unknowns,
also
means new products and new versions of life. Some organization and
companies
, introduce their products and services to us and claim them to be new.
This
type of advertising has multiple advantages for following
companies
and
also
unexpected drawbacks as well. In
this
essay, I will discuss the reason pointing to both points of view.
To begin
with, since an invitation claim to be the
first
of its own kind, they might earn the right for their technology to not be used by other
companies
without paying for their copyright.
Additionally
, according to the latest experience,
this
is the most common and finest way to attract customers.
Moreover
, these types of advertisers are required by customers as well, they need advertisements to compare goods.
as a result
, many people follow these commercials, and
also
make the following
companies
well-known by the time.
On the other hand
, these types of commercials are not always positively effective, specifically in Iran. Whether the product is new or not or even helpful or not, the advertising company should be honest. Unfortunately,
this
perspective has been damaged in long term. Customers have found other ways to define, the positive and negative sides of the development. Even now, there are only a few people who can rely on national television commercials, and it is going to reduce even more. To sum up, in my point of view,
this
kind of advertising has more negative aspects than positive for
companies
. That won’t be easy to gain the lost trust back. In spite of
this
, we should choose a secure solution for the advertisement policies.
Companies
should be more responsible for the trust of their client.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innovations
  • competitive advantage
  • planned obsolescence
  • consumer identity
  • status symbol
  • technological advancements
  • throwaway culture
  • environmental sustainability
  • unrealistic expectations
  • consumer deception
  • ethical practices
  • marketplace
  • capitalizing
  • differentiator
  • sustainability
  • hype
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