In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

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Developing technology and gagging new knowledge and exploring the unknowns,

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means new products and new versions of life. Some organization and

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, introduce their products and services to us and claim them to be new.

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type of advertising has multiple advantages for following

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and

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unexpected drawbacks as well. In

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essay, I will discuss the reason pointing to both points of view.

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with, since an invitation claim to be the

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of its own kind, they might earn the right for their technology to not be used by other

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without paying for their copyright.

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, according to the latest experience,

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is the most common and finest way to attract customers.

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, these types of advertisers are required by customers as well, they need advertisements to compare goods.

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, many people follow these commercials, and

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make the following

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well-known by the time.

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, these types of commercials are not always positively effective, specifically in Iran. Whether the product is new or not or even helpful or not, the advertising company should be honest. Unfortunately,

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perspective has been damaged in long term. Customers have found other ways to define, the positive and negative sides of the development. Even now, there are only a few people who can rely on national television commercials, and it is going to reduce even more. To sum up, in my point of view,

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kind of advertising has more negative aspects than positive for

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. That won’t be easy to gain the lost trust back. In spite of

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, we should choose a secure solution for the advertisement policies.

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should be more responsible for the trust of their client.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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288 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

innovations
competitive advantage
planned obsolescence
consumer identity
status symbol
technological advancements
throwaway culture
environmental sustainability
unrealistic expectations
consumer deception
ethical practices
marketplace
capitalizing
differentiator
sustainability
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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

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