Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert and Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages of visiting this area?

Currently,
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where unusual areas are difficult like
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desert and Antarctica are visited by a large number of visitors. In
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and
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of visiting
these destination
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. There are some disadvantages
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exploring
places
which are unique. The
first
one is the problems of
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health. Take
for example
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brother. Even though he grew up
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of the coldest countries he decided to visit
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desert. After they went there he got sick because of the hot condition.
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he went back home because there was no hospital
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hotel. The
second
one is too risky to survive because they are not controlled by any government. Approximately 11 years ago there was
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group of tourists in
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desert by predatory animals which were dangerous.
As a result
,
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many
of
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the visitor
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visitor
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about
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or tour of them were killed. There are many advantages of visiting
places
which are hard
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. People could see something beautiful and amazing.
For instance
,
last
year my parents explored Antarctica with
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group of visitors. They saw huge mountains and took a photo. The most amazing thing is that they saw water creatures like killer whales and others. As a
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, though is very cold there
this
trip was
such
an experience for them. In conclusion, I think that it has its own pluses and minuses but it depends on visiting
places
where
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are difficult because not all people have the qualities of an optimist.
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