The values learned from parents and family have a grater influence on the future success than the knowledge and skills learned from the school. To what extent do you agree or disagree
A person's success is undeniably a combination of both the values learned from
parents
and family and the skills obtained from lessons learned in school. However
, some argue that the initial values taught by parents
have a greater influence, which I agree to
an extent. Change preposition
with to
This
essay will discuss both perspectives in detail.
most of the necessary subjects
came from school. This
is because schools provide necessary subjects
such
as Mathematics, Science, Social, and Languages. Most subjects
are being used in the future because all of the subjects
are expertise that using in daily life. Furthermore
, schools also
provide exams for students to review knowledge and have a good responsibility to prepare for exams to achieve good scores. In addition
, the school also
provides homework for kids
to research outsourced information.
On the other hand
, parents
are also
great influencers on kids
, they believe in and let their parents
be their idols. Kids
are innocent, as the white paper can be painted in gorgeous or ugly pictures. For instance
, there are many cases, where parents
taught their children in the wrong way, which makes the children try drugs and alcohol. Moreover
, a family issue also
leads to the kid's behaviour, some parents
use violence with their kids
, which makes the kids
memorise the violence and grew up with the violent habit.
In the nutshell, I strongly agree that if parents
take care and taught their kids
without violence and encourage their kids
to learn in a high-ranking university will make their children grow up in an effective way.Submitted by natthataphon on
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