Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

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technology

has brought many

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and

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to our life. the approach

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how

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changed.it is true that

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bring

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a lot of

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to our lifestyle,

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it a positive development or

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one. On the one hand, there

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compelling reasons that

technology

has become a useful advent. nowadays many

people

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abroad due to work or study so they need to see their family.in

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time it comes to

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long distance and human being will be able to make a

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in addition

,

people

can attend

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international

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the international

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conference

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from all over the world virtually, due to

corona virus

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pandemic many

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and

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goes down,

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, students and employees were able to attend in their

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without going out

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their house,

furthermore

,many

people

can earn money with establish a shopping website without interaction with buyers.

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,

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need to interact with others, make a conversation with others and

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good, sometime everyone should make face-to-face interaction,

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there is no difference between

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and robots. today most of the

conversation

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are

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behind

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smart phones

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, and most of the

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and cries turn into emojis. The

grand mothers

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and

grand fathers

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who dint know how to use

technology

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have been

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their

children’s

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and their grandsons need to

visited

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and had

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. To sum up,

technology

could be

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positive or negative but, in my opinion, the advantages of the way it changes interaction among

people

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outweigh

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its drawbacks.

this

is a modern era and

technology

must be expanded to bring

convenient

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to our lifestyle.