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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time , and have health problems as a result. Why do many people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem ?

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Nowadays, people are not doing enough
workout
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workouts
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 either during their working day or in their leisure
time
.
This
 is due to heavy workloads at their jobs and expensive
gyms
 ,while
this
 issue can be solved by reducing
work
 pressure on employees and by cheaper availability of
fitness
centers
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. To start with the concept of why people are not getting enough exercise is because of some possible reasons .
First
 of all, workers have lots of
work
 at their jobs and they have to complete
this
 before a particular deadline .
As a result
 , they give all of their
time
 and energy to
work
 rather than thinking about any physical activities.
Secondly
,
gyms
 are available at higher costs in these recent days ,
as a result
, employees are unable to join the
fitness
 classes due to an expensive budget.
For instance
 , one of the local
gyms
 in my area charges fifteen dollars for an hour .
Therefore
, the abovementioned elements are mainly responsible for giving poor attention to health .
However
, working individuals have some
time
 for themselves, If their manager
allow
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 some breaks to their staff during their working day along with less amount of
work
then
 individuals could think about themselves and do some outdoor workouts. Another possible solution might be that regimes should lower the joining fee of
fitness
 spots so,
every one
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 can join
it
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without any concern
of
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 money .
In addition
 to
this
 ,
gyms
also
 provide
the
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free uniform and some
pair
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 of shoes to their members .
Hence
 , these solutions must be helpful to tackle the problem. In conclusion , it is true that people are not able to give
time
 to themselves due to their hectic
work
 day and expensive
fitness
 tools but the manager and government play a key role in addressing
this
 problem very well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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