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You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the opportunity to shop in the shopping center has cheap second-hand furniture. Write to the shop owner describing what you need and asking whether they have these items and what they cost

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Dear sir or madam , Hope
this
 letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing to inform you that I would like to purchase some used furniture in your shop . I have recently rented an unfurnished apartment .
Therefore
 , I am looking for a few things
such
 as a seven-seater sofa along with a centre table a few plastic garden chairs , four end tables for my living room , and a wooden cupboard with glass doors for my glass crockery . I would like to inquire whether you have all
this
 household equipment in handy . I hope they could be in good used condition .
Moreover
 , it would be very kind of you , if you let me know whether you have these items with you or not and at what price you are looking for these things . I look forward to hearing your reply regarding my enquiry . Yours faithfully , Maxmasoliyeva Joziba
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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