Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can study well at home through the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued by a substantial proportion of individuals

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that

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educational institutions are no longer mandatory because pupils can effortlessly complete their education at

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their

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birthplace. I partially agree with the given statement. To commence with, due to the easy accessibility of the

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a large number of adolescents are taking online classes. To illustrate

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, online

study

is extremely inexpensive as compared to schools and parents can

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from

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themselves from

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the schedule because interweb studies are providing huge information in

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less time as well as juveniles can comfortably make their daily

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routines

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and follow them.

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, a survey

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conducted by

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of education in the USA (United States of America) revealed that more than two-fifths

adolescents

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of adolescents

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want to complete their academic work at dwelling because they can

study

in

flexible

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way and they can do

part time

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work

to

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earn money.

Thus

, many students are liking to take online courses. Shifting towards the final view, the fact cannot be denied that,

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institutions

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are arranged proper equipment which is needed by school boy or school girl. To exemplify, seminaries are specially designed for

study

. It has

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staff and teachers which is helpful

to

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in

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managing the school because every subject is

teached

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by

different

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teacher

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teachers

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. One teacher cannot teach

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all subjects in a professional way.

Children's

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Children

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can learn communication and interaction skills because they

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many staff members and students in regular classes.

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,

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academies

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are extremely vital for students. To conclude, undoubtedly, schools are providing several

study related

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equipments

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equipment

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and children can effectively learn many new skills when the pupils take online courses it is not providing any basic

facility

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facilities

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.