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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other s think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own oipinion.

#people #attention #oipinion
advertising
were
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 used since
long
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a long
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 time ago to promote both goods
or
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and
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 services. it
develop
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develops
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 through time and now we can see so many different
advertisments
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advertisements
 anywhere
in
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on
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 various
medias
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media
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.
i
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 believe that advertising still give
impact
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an impact
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 even though there are only
small
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a small
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 amount of
people
 notice the commercials. back
then
, many
people
 use
flyer
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flyers
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 or
pamphlet
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pamphlets
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 to promote what they are offering. nowadays we can see many
advertisments
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advertisements
from
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on
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 our
gadget
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gadgets
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. the most important things are commercial suppose to be as creative as possible to gain interest from
people
. as an example, in
thailand
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Thailand
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, some insurance
company
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companies
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 make
a
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apply
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very sad video
advertisment
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advertisement
. even though it is only fiction, it was a big success and lead so many
people
 to join their insurance company.
in
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On
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contrary
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the contrary
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, so many
people
 think that advertising is not effective anymore and
i
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I
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 believe they are wrong. by seeing how
advertisment
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advertising
grow
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grows
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 today, we can see the same advertising every day. when we open our social media we can see the same commercial over and over again.
as a result
 it will get into
your
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our
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 memory unconsciously and maybe someday there will be an intuition that we need the products. to conclude,
either
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whether
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 you love or hate the
advertisment
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advertising
, we always see the commercial in many media. many
company
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companies
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 will still rely on
advertisment
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advertisement
advertising
 to promote their things especially when they come up with a
brand new
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brand-new
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 product. I believe advertising won't
dissapear
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disappear
 anytime in the future but it will come up with a
freasher
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fresh
 idea.
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