Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other s think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own oipinion.

advertising
were
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used since
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time ago to promote both goods
or
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services. it
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through time and now we can see so many different
advertisments
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advertisements
anywhere
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various
medias
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media
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.
i
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believe that advertising still give
impact
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an impact
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even though there are only
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a small
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amount of
people
notice the commercials. back
then
, many
people
use
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or
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to promote what they are offering. nowadays we can see many
advertisments
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advertisements
from
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our
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. the most important things are commercial suppose to be as creative as possible to gain interest from
people
. as an example, in
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, some insurance
company
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companies
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make
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very sad video
advertisment
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advertisement
. even though it is only fiction, it was a big success and lead so many
people
to join their insurance company.
in
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contrary
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the contrary
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, so many
people
think that advertising is not effective anymore and
i
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believe they are wrong. by seeing how
advertisment
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advertising
grow
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today, we can see the same advertising every day. when we open our social media we can see the same commercial over and over again.
as a result
it will get into
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memory unconsciously and maybe someday there will be an intuition that we need the products. to conclude,
either
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whether
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you love or hate the
advertisment
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advertising
, we always see the commercial in many media. many
company
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companies
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will still rely on
advertisment
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advertisement
advertising
to promote their things especially when they come up with a
brand new
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product. I believe advertising won't
dissapear
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disappear
anytime in the future but it will come up with a
freasher
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fresh
idea.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer behavior
  • emotional appeals
  • endorsements
  • targeted messaging
  • data analytics
  • social media
  • personalize
  • effectiveness
  • psychological principles
  • scarcity effect
  • social proof
  • reciprocity
  • ubiquity
  • ad fatigue
  • desensitized
  • ad-blockers
  • overexposure
  • skeptical
  • authenticity
  • motive
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