You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter describe the public event explain why you think he/she would like the event write how you can help your friend with accommodation

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Dear Joy, great to hear from you, I am glad everything going well for you. I just writing to you to invite

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you to

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the Christmas carnival in my town. Our schoolmates are coming for

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event and it will be a get-together for our old friends. We are planning to stay in my parent's home, which has enough rooms and facilities for all of us. The main attraction of the carnival is the food festival, there are several restaurants and cafes that are participating

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year including Indian, Chinese, Arabic and vegetarian foods are the main attraction in

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festival. As a foodie, you will enjoy it. There is

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some cultural programs and music night are conducting in the carnival. tribes music is the highlighted item and

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apply

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famous musicians are coming to conduct the musical nights. I have attached the program brochure along with

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letter. Let me update your flight details,

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will pick you up from the airport I can't wait to see you with love Hasna

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

171 words

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You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter describe the public event explain why you think he/she would like the event write how you can help your friend with accommodation

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • introduce yourself • explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have