Today females have more opportunities than it was in
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world. Now they can study at school ,
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take part in voting etc. Many individuals feel that
this
scenario has given more issues than correcting
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.
However
, I strongly disagree with
this
statement
Firstly
, nowadays we have many already educated
women
and many girls studying at schools and universities.
As a result
, educated and clever people are increasing in our society.
That is
mean our economy ,
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,
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will become
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and stronger .
In Addition
,
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will appear frequently just because of the fact that around 40% are
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.
Secondly
, now girls can choose
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role and decide
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they want to be.
For instance
,
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the 18 century in
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women
could be only a housewife.
However
, today ladies can work out
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want to have
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and take care of
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family or
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want to be
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single independent
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and make
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successful
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.
Furthermore
, females
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many ways more gifted than males.
For example
, in cooking , painting ,
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medicine etc.
Accordingly
more
now taking by them so, they
also
become the source of money and stabilities
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families.
Personally, I am happy that now
women
can do what they want and nowadays they have already broken
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that
women
are weak gender.
In conclusion, the variety of opportunities for
women
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our world and
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society to more equality, and
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.
However
, we men do not need to forget that we need to help , support and encourage our wives , girlfriends , friends, sisters, mums etc.