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An industrial area in the town of Norbiton is illustrated regarding the current status and plans. Overall, as it can be seen, by replacing the factories with housing buildings, improving the roadway system, and founding new urban facilities, the area will become a habitation region. Based on the data, the area is between a river and a road connected to a central
circle
 with a small western
street
 surrounded by factories. A new
street
 with a bridge passing the river will transfer the passengers to newly founded housing in the north. Another
street
, surrounded by housing, will construct in the northwest.
Additionally
, the central
circle
 will connect to a smaller
circle
 in the middle of the south road.
Furthermore
, the western
street
 will reach a school at the end, and just before it, a playground facility will build between the housing buildings above the
street
. The new medical
center
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 and shops will be found in the southeast and southwest of the central
circle
.
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