You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear sir or madam, My writing purpose is to learn some information about the Microbiology seminar. Currently, I am working in a plant biology lab in New Zealand for 1.5 years

although

I am interested in microbiology.

First

, I would like to learn about how much is the seminar fee and which activities are included in it. If it is possible, I would like to see the detailed program because I saw there will be multiple events that week. I would like to join as much as possible. Plus, I wonder about the accommodation. I don't prefer sharing my room or staying in loudly area. I want to plan a quiet trip where I can learn and

also

, relax. There is one important detail, I have a lot of serious food allergies and I have to be careful about my diet so will there be multiple food options or should solve the situation by myself? My

last

question is when is the seminar exactly? As a full-time employee, I have to give information to my manager. Yours faithfully, Elif Beyza Önder

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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some experts believe that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages pf this outweigh disadvantages?

Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree ith this view.

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally Discuss both sides and give your opinion

The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst profesionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or a college lecture.