You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter • say who you are • give details about the accident • suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

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possible hazards in your supermarket. I am a resident of the Collingwood housing scheme and I have been living here since 2002.

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, I often visit your store to purchase households. Because it is located near my apartment and has many varieties of

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products.

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Sunday I had a bad incident in your grocery shop which is I fell down in front of the cool drink fridge because that floor was Slippery. Due to that fact, my Knee is broken and as per the doctor's ,advice I have to take bed rest for a couple of weeks.

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, I noticed the reason for the hazard and found water leakage from the fridge because that door was not closed properly.

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, I would like to suggest that place a Caution signboard over the place and fix that fridge door as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, Sam

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

159 words

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