Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is said that only
governments
should be responsible/ accountable for solving environment
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environmental
problems
as well as the measures be
done to protect the ecosystem, whereas others argue that all citizens should take Fix the infinitive
to be
the
responsibility.Correct article usage
apply
This
essay will elucidate the opposing statements in depth as well as my own standpoint.
On the one hand, governments
can spend nations' expenses on protecting environment
. To protect Add an article
the environment
environment
, Add an article
the environment
for example
, some projects or researches
are needed especially for Fix the agreement mistake
research
nature
poor regions, which are the dessert or destroyed forests, and polluting area
, which are Fix the agreement mistake
areas
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an ocean
ocean
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oceans
with
full of chemical products, Change preposition
apply
garbage
, and so on, these actions can be held only by governments
because of money. For instance
, the Japanese government
invested Change preposition
in the
the
project which tries to produce Correct article usage
a
the
device of generation energy by using hydrogen, and it takes Correct article usage
a
the
cost Correct article usage
apply
of
2 trillion yen. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, government
can make a restriction for keeping Add an article
the government
nature
cleanly
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clean
to
not only individuals, which have to pay tax for throwing oversized Change preposition
for
garbage
, but also
company
, especially Fix the agreement mistake
companies
factory
, which are restricted or paid tax to emit carbon oxide and drain polluted water Fix the agreement mistake
factories
up
to a certain amount. If critical Change preposition
apply
environment
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environmental
problems
, which is
about destroying Correct subject-verb agreement
are
globe
, have occurred, Correct article usage
the globe
government
have more possibility to prevent Add an article
the government
the
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apply
nature
from destroyers
due to using regulations or spending money than Add a missing verb
being destroyers
people
.
On the other hand
, If individuals do not have responsibility
to preserve Add an article
a responsibility
the responsibility
nature
, the earth's destroying speed would become faster. The main reason that environmental destruction such
as deforestation is the
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apply
human's
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human
behaviors
. Change the spelling
behaviours
For example
, the 2 causes of ocean pollution are the chemical materials produced by Add an article
the manufacturer
manufacturer
, and Fix the agreement mistake
manufacturers
garbage
like plastics throwed
by citizens. The irresponsibility of individuals would prompt Correct your spelling
thrown
people
to throw garbage
everywhere, drain or emit the
harmful subsistence. Correct article usage
apply
However
, if people
have responsibility
to protect Add an article
a responsibility
the responsibility
nature
, their consciousness to
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of
earth
would be changed Correct article usage
the earth
to
the better. In Japan, Change preposition
for
people
did not have the
attention to Correct article usage
apply
emvironmental
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environmental
problems
because government
did not incorporate these Add an article
the government
problems
to
the Change preposition
into
curricurums
. Correct your spelling
curriculum
curriculums
However
, a decade later, as rising the attention of environment
all over the world, Correct article usage
the environment
Japanese
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the Japanese
government
cannnot
longer ignore these Correct your spelling
cannot
problems
and they have tuckeled
and Correct your spelling
tackled
teach
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taught
people
these issues. Thanks to the government
's endeavor
, young Change the spelling
endeavour
people
have the awareness to protect nature
. In a recent servey
in Japan, many Correct your spelling
survey
youth
tend to select Change to a plural noun
youths
the
products which are made Correct article usage
apply
by
eco-friend materials.
In conclusion, while the existence of Change preposition
with
governments
would be helpful to protect nature
, citizens have to be responsible for conserving environment
as well Add an article
the environment
as
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apply
governments
, and the better attitudes of humans to environment
would become a key factor to Add an article
the environment
reserve
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preserve
nature
for a long time.Submitted by t.watpot216 on
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