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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people believe that free
health
care
 should be provide to all by every
country
, even despite the latest medicinal treatments are very expensive and not available to
health
 service. I firmly agree with that thought, as basic
health
care
 should be available to every member of
country
 without any cost.
First
 of all, in my opinion, every government should be responsible for the
health
 of its citizens. A
country
 cannot lay its claim as people friendly if it cannot even provide the basic medical services for the needy. Few countries have already succeeded in implementing
this
.
For instance
: count countries
such
 as England, Canada and France provide free medical
care
 to all their citizens. These countries can afford
such
 a scheme by effectively collecting taxes from their population. When people realize the benefits, they would not mind contributing to the
country
's finances in the form of taxes.
Moreover
, if
country
 will provide free
health
care
 to all, I think
this
 can influence to morbidity on the good side.
Firstly
, the incidence ill decrease significantly.
Secondly
, states get rid of useless deaths and
thirdly
 life expectancy will increase..
That is
 all have a positive impact on
country
.
For example
: Japan using free basic
health
care
 and increasing the level of medicine has increased life expectancy to 80 years. Considering the pros of free
health
care
, I want to conclude, free
health
care
 has a lot of pros and every government should have a free
health
 service for the development and becoming of the best.
Submitted by Allazhar on

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