In many countries these days, the number of people continuing their education after school has increased, and the range of courses available at universities and colleges has also increased. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Education plays an important role in

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society

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development. It is witnessed that there is an

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amount of people continuing their

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study

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after school, followed by the range of

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available to adapt

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demand. I believe

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is a positive development. Higher education could level up the knowledge of a people.

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with, it is more effective to get a job if students benefit themselves

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university

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studies.

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, the

courses

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they learn in

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lay the foundation for

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life.

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, the

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of

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courses

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are

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chance for more students to

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their passion and enthusiasm.

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, if a student failed an entrance exam to a

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university

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, he could have another chance to

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in another

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course with

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score and

learning

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what he wants.

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, due to the highly competitive marketplace, it is difficult for people with lower education standards to find

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good

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.

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, there is no denying that many quit

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study

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to start a business and become successful like Bill Gates.

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, they must pour a lot of time and effort

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practical experience while students learn that from school

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. To conclude, the essay is about the positive trend which is the increase of learners and

university

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courses

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.