many people spoil natural beauties like sea ,beaches ,mountains and lakes .do people responsible for that ?what should be done to stop people to spoil natural beauty ?give the reasons and examples for your answer.

in
this
era, the exploitation of
nature
is one of the most dangerous activities that were done by some people. they took
resources
from the land (
such
as mountains and forests) and
in
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the water (
such
as beaches and lakes) without thinking about sustainability. today, we need
a
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policy to stop
this
activity. it is true that our world has rich
resources
from
nature
.
for example
, as a tropical country, Indonesia is a biodiversity country.
moreover
, Indonesia has many tropical forests. unfortunately,
this
diversity has not been used wisely by the minority
especially
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the people who leave in near the forest.
furthermore
, they are doing deforestation year by year. in
this
case, getting an income is the main purpose of
this
activity. as the result,
nature
was destroyed everywhere and caused global warming.
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this
situation, the authority should give policies to use
resources
. for the people who are destroying it must give the country a big compensation.
besides
that, the ministry must educate the community to save our environment. in general, the community do not know how to use the
resources
wisely. by
this
policy, we hope can stop
this
dangerous activity.
in addition
, if there are some areas were destroyed, for society who did it is must fixing these areas.
for example
, after mining a forest, the company must do reclamation for
this
field. so the area will be green territory in the future. in conclusion, destroying
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because of some population must be done together, especially by the authority. the law will make regulations that can guide how to use the
resources
wisely and how to protect our
nature
together.
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