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In many countries, there are an increasing number of private cars. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Nowadays, the
demands
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 of using private
vehicles
 are exponentially increasing.
This
 essay will elaborate
the
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 positive and negative impacts of the phenomenon and provide relevant evidence. There are two main benefits of using private transportation on a daily basis towards the economic sector and humans’ sense of convenience.
To begin
, since
people
 who have their own transportation should pay
its
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 annual taxes, it can contribute to the economic revenue growth of the country.
In other words
, the more cars owned by the communities, the more taxes will be collected by the authority.
For instance
, my father should pay around a hundred rupiah per item every year, so it will
increase
 the local income in terms of taxes.
Secondly
,
this
 means of transportation will make
people
 feel comfortable
to go
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 to some places
,
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 since they can commute easily using private cars without relying on public transport. Privately owned
vehicles
,
on the other hand
, might
increase
 the congestion on the roads. In
this
 circumstance, societies will use their own four-wheel vehicle to commute every day and eventually
result
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 in
the
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increase
of
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 traffic jams. As an example, in Indonesia's capital city, Jakarta,
people
 should experience traffic for hours every day on the way to their workplace.
Additionally
, it might
increase
 the number of accidents because there are lots of
vehicles
 on
roads
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.
Therefore
, commuting by other modes of transport
such
 as trains will be safer. In conclusion,
although
 private
vehicles
 might be advantageous due to the
increase
 in GDP and individuals’ freedom to travel,
people
 should consider the other effects
such
 as the traffic jams and accidents caused by driving private
transports
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transport
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.
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