People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown from other areas. As a results, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantage of this tend outweigh the disadvantage?

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people are interested to dine
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varieties of food from all over the world.
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more negative implication than positive results because of a few reasons. The advancement of transportation provide better opportunities for
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from other countries. so people can able to get
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kind of food varieties from different countries.
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