You ordered two items through the internet and you received two different items. Write a letter to the manager: Explain about what you ordered. Ask why the two other items were different. Ask about how he would solve this problem.

My name is S. I am writing
this
letter to complain about the poor service I received from your company. I ordered two items that red shoes through the internet
last
day.
However
, I received two different shoes. I planned to give that shoes to my sister as a gift
next
Monday. Because
next
Monday is my sister's birthday. It must be a wonderful event. I cannot order any other presents. Because I do not have enough time. I have raised the complaint for the same a lot of times by calling your customer representative, but there has been no resolution provided till yet. I hereby request you to please resolve my issue as soon as possible or else I have to stop using your service on an unsatisfactory note.
Also
, for
this
month I am not going to pay for your service unless the problem is resolved. Yours faithfully, RASHIDOVA S S Rashidova
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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