Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communications, such as letters, emails, or telephone calls.

Of the plethora of identified means of
communication
, some people have leaned in favour of
face
to
face
interaction
as opposed to
communication
via other avenues
such
as
emails
,
letters
and
telephone
calls. Critically assessing
this
assertion,
i
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would want to queue behind the proponents of the fact that
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face to
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face
communication
is better.
To begin
with, one of the major
advanatges
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advantages
of physical
interaction
is the ability to feel the presence of
person
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.
This
phenomenon is as abstract as it is
as
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physical. Arguably, being able to behold a person's laughter, smile, frown, or even warmth are vital parts of
communication
regarded as
non verbal
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cues.
This
is definitely impossible with
letters
or
emails
.
Additionally
, physical
interaction
engenders better expression. It provides the latitude for lengthy talks and extensive clarifications.
Conversely
,
emails
and
letters
are limited by space, and in similar
terms
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telephone
conversation is limited by
cost
. The more the talk, the more the pay. During the COVID era, people switched to online meetings, which was good
initially
but the reality came sooner that it would be impossible for it to replace
face
to
face
interactions because of limited expression and inherent financial implications. A brief mention of financial
cost
. It
cost
almost nothing to have a
face
to
face
interaction
but
telephone
conversation requires money,
emails
would need internet subscription and
letters
would need a postage stamp and postage fee.
For instance
, it
cost
some money to subscribe to an app like zoom to hold departmental meetings but
physical
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meeting is free. Suffice
to
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say that, there are some upsides
of
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letters
,
emails
or
telephone
. These include the ease of
communication
.
Instead
of travelling a thousand
kilometers
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for a meeting, conference calls can come in handy.
Furthermore
,
communication
may be quicker with technologies
such
as
emails
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and
telephone
. It takes less than 5 seconds for
emails
to be delivered and voice calls can be done in
real time
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. In conclusion,
although
advancements in technology may have made
communication
easier via
emails
,
telephone
and
letters
,
however
, the superiority of
face to
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face
communication
cannot be overemphasized given its inherent ability to ensure both verbal and
non verbal
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cues and almost zero financial
cost
.
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