A person' s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In modern life, people have started estimating
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others whether they are rich or popular in society. Humans have stopped paying attention to the personality and the internal world of a Correct article usage
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as they are not as essential as Use synonyms
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social status. I disagree with Correct article usage
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view because individual features Linking Words
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as honour, generosity, loyalty, Linking Words
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will be always the best for having a particular opinion about someone.
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of all, it would be extremely complicated to have any relationships if a Linking Words
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sees just the power of money and no personality. Being a CEO of a company, Use synonyms
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individual has to communicate with partners, employees and other folks. Judging others just by looking at their wealth, Linking Words
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is likely to have losses as nobody would like to cooperate with a Correct pronoun usage
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without honour, trust and other values. Use synonyms
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, the well-known CEO of Apple, Tim Cook, managed to keep friendly relationships with surrounding people and Linking Words
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attitude helped him to get maximum profit compared to Steve Jobs, who seemed to be harsh talking with everyone.
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, even having a lot of money, a Linking Words
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is still lonely if he or she does not rich internal world. Nobody would like to stay a friend with someone who did not appreciate them. Use synonyms
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, if someone loses wealth, Linking Words
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individual will see that has no friends at all.
In conclusion, nowadays people seem to judge others just because of their wealth rather than features but I believe that it is not true and features will be vital at all times.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite