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In many countries small shops and town centers are going out of business because people tend to drive to the large-out-of town stores. This results to an increase in car use and it also means that people without cars have limited access to out of the town stores. Do you think the advantages of such development outweigh its disadvantages?

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In their busy ,schedule
people
 do not have enough time to freak out their stress so, they try to do
this
 while shopping so , they prefer to buy things from the countryside shopping centre.
However
, it increases air
pollution
 because of the usage of the car for shopping as well as
traffic
 on the
roads
, while there is only one advantage and
that is
people
 get more cheap products compared to small
shops
 and the town centre.
people
 tend to use a car for shopping for their grocery and other necessary things which increase air
pollution
 reason behind
that is
 every single family use their personal automobile and it increases the number of
car
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cars
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 on the
roads
, and due to
this
 the carbon emission rate shows a spike.
For example
,the study by the government
pollution
 board, in India shows that
pollution
 has been increasing in metropolitan for a few decades.
In addition
 to
this
, more
people
 prefer to shop from remote stores increasing
traffic
 problems on the
roads
.
For instance
, in a developing country like India, the public always tries to find
a cheap items
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cheap items
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 for that they are ready to travel several kilometres because of
this
traffic
 jams occur on
roads
 which connect the city with the sub-burb. For
this
 ,
reason
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the reason
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 the trend of shopping in the countryside
shops
 is a negative development. the only positive side of shopping in form countryside
shop
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shops
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 is , the public can get cheaper products.The reason is there is fewer tax imposed by the government. To conclude, the trend of shopping from large out-of-town
shops
 rather than small
shops
 and shopping centres
has
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have
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 more disadvantages
such
 as an increment in air
pollution
 and
traffic
 on
roads
 compared to advantages like
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a
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cheap
product
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products
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.
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