Children today are too dependent on computers and electronics entertainment it would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports and games. Do you agree or disagree?

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among

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is arguably a continuous problem issue around the world

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who are still in school, are getting criminal records for crimes

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as joy-riding, anti-social behaviour and vandalising public property. The biggest question being asked is why?

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should be focused on school work not terrorising local communities.

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essay. Undoubtedly, one reason for the

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increasing among

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is the constant need for acceptance. Crimes

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as drunk driving or doing drugs are often committed because of peer pressure and the wanting to be accepted into a certain group. A survey showed that 3 out of 5

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, aged between 12 and 17, had attended a party and drank alcohol. It is noticeable how the young try to emulate and are influenced by the people around them. The media in terms of how movies and gangsters are portrayed

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type of hedonistic and party behaviour.

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, another reason for the

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increase is because of family problems. A significant number of

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, have a problem at home and feel they can not talk to anyone about family issues. In

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case, the crimes are committed because the

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find it a realise from the home pressure.

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, family budgets can be stretched and

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may cost losses for

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, for ,instance a mobile phone, an iPad or iPhone. It goes without saying that arguments with parents can cause

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. It does not necessarily follow that the

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among

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will be increasing in the future. Good parenting skills can help

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focus on their school. Not only that but

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are basic for teenager's actives and positions. Most

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that have their parents to support them tend to set goals for their lives and put pressure on

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to make their dreams come true. So, they stay focused on what they want to do and they are not influenced by what the other

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do.

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, community involvement is a good way to decrease the

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cultural, and religious groups can help

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to keep busy and foster pro-social skills. In light of the above,

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among

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is a major problem that tortures our society. The

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of

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reached a peak in the

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10 years. ,

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let us hope that the following years will be better and the

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will plummet to an all-time low.

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