Children today are too dependent on computers and electronics entertainment it would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports and games. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays

crime

among

teenagers

is arguably a continuous problem issue around the world

Teenagers

who are still in school, are getting criminal records for crimes

such

as joy-riding, anti-social behaviour and vandalising public property. The biggest question being asked is why?

Teenagers

should be focused on school work not terrorising local communities.

This

topic will be

further

discussed in

this

essay. Undoubtedly, one reason for the

crime

rate

increasing among

teenagers

is the constant need for acceptance. Crimes

such

as drunk driving or doing drugs are often committed because of peer pressure and the wanting to be accepted into a certain group. A survey showed that 3 out of 5

teenagers

, aged between 12 and 17, had attended a party and drank alcohol. It is noticeable how the young try to emulate and are influenced by the people around them. The media in terms of how movies and gangsters are portrayed

also

play a role in

this

type of hedonistic and party behaviour.

Furthermore

, another reason for the

crime

rate

increase is because of family problems. A significant number of

teenagers

, have a problem at home and feel they can not talk to anyone about family issues. In

this

case, the crimes are committed because the

teenagers

find it a realise from the home pressure.

Besides

, family budgets can be stretched and

this

may cost losses for

teenagers

, for ,instance a mobile phone, an iPad or iPhone. It goes without saying that arguments with parents can cause

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to commit a

crime

. It does not necessarily follow that the

crime

rate

among

teenagers

will be increasing in the future. Good parenting skills can help

teenagers

focus on their school. Not only that but

also

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are basic for teenager's actives and positions. Most

teenagers

that have their parents to support them tend to set goals for their lives and put pressure on

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to make their dreams come true. So, they stay focused on what they want to do and they are not influenced by what the other

teenagers

do.

Additionally

, community involvement is a good way to decrease the

crime

rate

.

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active involvement in sports,

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cultural, and religious groups can help

teenagers

to keep busy and foster pro-social skills. In light of the above,

crime

among

teenagers

is a major problem that tortures our society. The

rate

of

crime

reached a peak in the

last

10 years. ,

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let us hope that the following years will be better and the

rate

will plummet to an all-time low.

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