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In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages

#future #robots #jobs #humans #development
Robots
 and auto technology are growing very fast
especially
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 in the
last
 few years. It
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also
 start to take human
jobs
 and it
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 it perfectly and better than the human themselves. It is argued
that
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the pros
outweighs
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 the cons or
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. In my
opinion
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 I think the advantages are more in people still can find more and more
jobs
 even with
presence
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 of
robots
. Science
are
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 growing fast and we see more technology in all aspects. Companies are usually trying to hire the most qualified person among many other competitors for the job.
Therefore
 having
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robot
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 doing the job with
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 errors and with higher quality will be more satisfying.
Actually
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 new
jobs
 going to be offered for the worker if the
robots
 are used. They will be responsible for providing, gathering robot pieces and creating the
robots
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.
However
, some very important tasks like flying and some diagnostic procedures can’t be done without machines because
it
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 can handle many orders at the same time with almost no error. Some argue that if
the
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jobs
 are being taken by computers and
softwares
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software
this
 going to affect people and there will be no more available
jobs
. I think
this
 is going to harm some but for sure it will help many
other
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. Some
jobs
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 to be done without errors and it is difficult for
human
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a human
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 to do
it
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them
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 perfectly.
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Human
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A human
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 can still find
jobs
 with
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robots
 like maintaining and fixing. To conclude, the growth of
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 industry is noticeably fast. In
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recent
years
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 it is obvious that it is going to replace
human
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humans
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 in some industries and some difficult tasks. In my point of
view
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 I see that the pros
is
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 higher than the cons and people going to live mostly without
the
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human error which
sometime
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 is lethal like car accidents and many other.
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