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You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear sir, I am writing to express my sincere apologies for the mistake I made in the classroom. I understand that my actions have caused inconvenience, and for that, I am truly sorry. The situation occurred when I was working on a
group
 project, and I failed to double-check the information I was sharing with the
group
.
As a result
, the
group
 ended up submitting incorrect information, which affected the overall project. I regret that my mistake
has
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caused the
group
 to lose valuable points, and I take full responsibility for my actions. I want to assure you that
this
 was an isolated incident and it will not happen again. I understand the importance of accuracy and attention to detail, and I will make sure to double-check all information before sharing it in the future. I
also
 want to take
this
 opportunity to apologize to my
group
 members, and I will do my best to make it up to them. I understand that
this
 mistake reflects poorly on me and my commitment to the course, and I assure you that I am fully dedicated to making the necessary changes to improve my performance and be a more responsible student. Thank you for your time and consideration. Regards, Adi
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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