Write a letter to your manager to report a mistake you found in a magazine article about your company In your letter • Describe the magazine and the article. • What was the mistake? • Explain what you would like the manager to do about it.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I, Jane Doe, am a PR representative from Google.Inc. Our company was recently featured in an article in your lead magazine, Forbes. The article is titled "Top 10 Tech Startups" and was published as a part of the March 2022 edition. Thank you for featuring our company in

this

prestigious article.

Although

, I am writing with regard to a factual error regarding the location of our headquarters. Google Inc's headquarters is located at Redwood Shores, SF.

However

, the piece incorrectly mentioned Dallas, TX.

This

has caused some other publications to falsely report that our headquarters has been moved to Texas. I'm hoping Forbes can print a correction in the April Edition.

This

would help clear the confusion among other news agencies, reporters and investors. Please let me know if you have any concerns about printing the above corrections. I look forward to the continued collaboration between Google and Forbes in the years to come and a correction printed at the earliest would be much appreciated. Thank you Regards, Jane Doe

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