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Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

#people #brands #clothes #cars #items #development
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modern
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world
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 a lot of
people
 spend money on famous
brands
 of clothes, phones, cars and other expensive things.
On
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 my point of view, there might be different reasons. First of all, some
people
 find it cool to have
famous
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a famous
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 brand.
Also
, some of them can show that they have money by purchasing expensive stuff. You can pay attention
on
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 children. They always want the best toy or phone to show it to their friends. The same situation you may see with adult
people
.
On the other hand
,
for instance
, rich
persons
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people
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 or celebrities can't wear cheap clothes or drive "Zaporoshez" because they have a status and can't just do what they want, as
paparazzi
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always
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 there, to show it to the world.
Moreover
,
such
 famous
brands
 can be just good and comfortable, simply the best,
that
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 is why
people
 may love and want them.
For
example
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IPhone
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 is the most popular
among
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apply
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phones
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phone
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. I am sure,
that is
 because of
it's
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its
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 great
designe
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design
 and how easy it is even for older
people
 to use it. I admit that it is good when
people
 want those famous
brands
, as it might have
positive
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a positive
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 side on development. As other
brands
 will do their best to become better. So
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as a result
 we will have many great products for a good
competible
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compatible
 price.
To sum up
 I want to say that it is always good when we have our favorite brand. As we spend less time to think what we want and at the same time other
brands
 develop themself that leads to changes
what
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 is always good.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Conspicuous consumption
  • Brand loyalty
  • Elitism
  • Marketing strategies
  • Consumer psychology
  • Purchase behavior
  • Economic stratification
  • Sustainability
  • Luxury goods
  • Peer influence
  • Global marketing
  • Brand equity
  • Materialistic values
  • Status symbol
  • Quality perception
  • Investment piece
  • Influencer culture
  • Exclusivity
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