The grwoth of online shopping will one day Lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?
It is possible that all shops in towns and cities will disappear because of the increasing online shopping
behavior
. Change the spelling
behaviour
However
, I strongly disagree with this
opinion which will be discussed in this
essay.
First
of all, people
do want to see and touch original products
. This
is because they want to make sure that products
are in
good quality and worth paying for. Change preposition
of
For example
, I bought online garbage bags and they can not be used as the plastic is too thin, therefore
I have to buy a new set of them at BigC. Another reason is that we want to know if products
suit us. For instance
, I always try on clothes in shops before buying online
.
The Correct pronoun usage
them online
second
point is that this
can avoid online frauds
. Many Fix the agreement mistake
fraud
people
are deceived to transfer money to sellers, however
they do not receive their goods. Add a comma
,however
For instance
, my friend bought a furby
doll for two thousand baht, but she received nothing. Change the capitalization
Furby
Therefore
, a lot of them rely on shopping in stores rather than online. Purchasing at stores can also
be trustworthy. As a
lot of Change preposition
A
people
receive fake products
from online shopping. For example
, I shopped for a second hand
Add a hyphen
second-hand
brandname
Correct your spelling
brand name
last
year and received an unauthentic Gucci belt.
In conclusion, this
essay completely disagrees with this
statement that one day all stores in towns and cities will be closed once the number of online shopping rises since Correct determiner usage
the
people
do want to see and touch original products
and the store can avoid online frauds
.Fix the agreement mistake
fraud
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