The grwoth of online shopping will one day Lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?

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It is possible that all shops in towns and cities will disappear because of the increasing online shopping
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.
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, I strongly disagree with
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opinion which will be discussed in
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essay.
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of all,
people
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do want to see and touch original
products
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.
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is because they want to make sure that
products
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are
in
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good quality and worth paying for.
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, I bought online garbage bags and they can not be used as the plastic is too thin,
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I have to buy a new set of them at BigC. Another reason is that we want to know if
products
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suit us.
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, I always try on clothes in shops before buying
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them online
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. The
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point is that
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can avoid online
frauds
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. Many
people
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are deceived to transfer money to sellers,
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however
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they do not receive their goods.
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, my friend bought a
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doll for two thousand baht, but she received nothing.
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, a lot of them rely on shopping in stores rather than online. Purchasing at stores can
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be trustworthy.
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lot of
people
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receive fake
products
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from online shopping.
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, I shopped for a
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second hand
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brandname
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brand name
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year and received an unauthentic Gucci belt. In conclusion,
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essay completely disagrees with
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this
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statement that one day all stores in towns and cities will be closed once the number of online shopping rises since
people
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do want to see and touch original
products
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and the store can avoid online
frauds
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fraud
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