Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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School
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plays a major role in children's life
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some people think that
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should not have homework from their educator,
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others believe that assignments have a very important role in the educational process.
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,assignments are a key step in the learning process because it's help
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to maintain what they learned from
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and can have a major impact
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students
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result
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a student who will spend more
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studying and trying to solve exercise of the assignment will have more chance to have good marks in future than
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a student
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who
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less
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the other hand,
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homework
can be painful for some people because
kids
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spend more than 6 hours at
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a long
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.They need to take rest and practice other activities
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as
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or play games that can help them to fresh up and relax as I was
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after
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I wished to have
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free
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to play football or take rest after a long day of
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but
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my
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gived
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gives
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long list of
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homework
that takes all my
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and energy . Schools and
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gouverment
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government
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need to find a way to make
educatinal
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educational
procees
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process
more fun and enjoyable for
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,
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will increase
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marks and will make children more motivated for
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time
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. In conclusion , I believe that
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need more
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to rest and
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up ,
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school
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time
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is enough for them to learn and improve
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their
skills without
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homework
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Instills discipline
  • Deepen understanding
  • Independent learning
  • Reinforcement
  • Parental involvement
  • Curriculum insight
  • Burnout
  • Student stress
  • Leisure time
  • Relevance of assignments
  • Project-based learning
  • Interactive learning
  • Individual learning styles
  • Conducive study environment
  • Homework policy
  • Balanced approach
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