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Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Recent technology enabled us to acquire information easily from everywhere. Some people argue that online learning will take over
schools
,
however
, I believe that
schools
 are necessary for
kids
 to grow up,
therefore
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 they will not be demolished.
First
 of all,
schools
 are important for
kids
 to grow up as a human. It is widely understood that
schools
 are the places where
students
 study not only academic topics but
also
 humanity.
For instance
, when
kids
 interact with friends, they tend to imagine what others think before making an action, and they learn whether the action they took was good or bad by their friends' expressions.
Furthermore
, those subjects
such
 as physical exercises can only be taught in person rather than online.
Therefore
,
schools
 are not able to substitute for online learning.
Secondly
, online learning has risks which do not only prevent
students
 from learning but
also
 endanger them and their families physically and financially. Researchers stated that an increasing number of people were facing cyberattacks
such
 as malware infection and phishing nowadays.
In other words
, threat actors can penetrate
students
' laptops, and in the worst case, they will manipulate their computers and
as a result
, they can be infected by viruses. Eventually,
students
 and their parents will be required to take severe action
such
 as paying a ransom. For
this
 reason, it is not safe for children to work from home. Overall,
although
 distance study is a current trend, I completely disagree with the view that
schools
 will be unnecessary.
Instead
, to sustain
kids
 to learn humanity and to protect
students
 from virus infection, I do think that
schools
 will remain to play an important role for
kids
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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