Shops should not be allowed to sell food and drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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that the scientist and psychoanalyst Immanuel Velikovsky touched upon in his 1950 bestseller "Worlds in Collision". According to the author, more than 3000 years ago, something huge hit Jupiter and formed a space object: Use synonyms
this
object roamed around Linking Words
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billiard table for a long time and at high speed caused many disasters and transformed into what we call Venus. Naturally, a large number of physicists and chemists immediately declined Velikovsky's Linking Words
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, at least because it violated Newton's law.The other Use synonyms
skepticism
was more significant. It was said that the planets have a different Change the spelling
scepticism
composition
, because of which Venus could not be part of Jupiter. Fix the agreement mistake
compositions
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finally
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theory
, as well as to prove it.
About these Use synonyms
discussions
many of you might already be familiarAdd a comma
,discussions
, especially
about the Big Bang Change preposition
with, especially
Theory
. Use synonyms
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Theory
explains how the whole Add an article
The theory
universe
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was born
born
from tiny Add a missing verb
was born
dence
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dense
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particles
particle
after Fix the agreement mistake
particles
its
explosion. Correct pronoun usage
their
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universe
constantly expanding and cooling. But what if Use synonyms
this
"big bang", in accordance with Linking Words
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theory
suggested in 2001, appeared after Correct article usage
the theory
massive
collision ? -Based on Correct article usage
a massive
this
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theory
, earlier there were two universes, which for some Use synonyms
reasons
collided and, Fix the agreement mistake
reason
as a result
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universe
was created.
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Expansion
of the Correct article usage
The expansion
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explains that there are many these Use synonyms
kind
of universes like ours. These universes gradually hit each other in Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
the
space which follows with their expansion. Correct article usage
apply
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said that Use synonyms
one
day our Use synonyms
universe
might collide with other Use synonyms
one
and Use synonyms
new
habitable platform will be created.
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a new
does
it mean at least from books of physics or films Unnecessary verb
apply
such
as "Interstellar". Black Hole Linking Words
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this
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
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spatial
location, which has Correct article usage
a spatial
such
incredibly immense gravitational force, which is not allowing the light to escape. For that reason, these Linking Words
kings
of Correct your spelling
kinds
holes
are absorbing everything around them. Often these Use synonyms
holes
are former huge stars that have collapsed at extreme density during supernova explosions.
So, we figured out black Use synonyms
holes
, but Use synonyms
the
nature tent to show us its perfect symmetry in all aspects of life. There is something controversial… and if there are black Correct article usage
apply
holes
, why not let the white people have the opposite effect? If black Use synonyms
holes
are capable of absorbing everything around them, Use synonyms
then
, logically, there must be objects that, Linking Words
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pushing
everything away. Maybe that’s why we’ve never seen them before, it is simply impossible to get close to them.Wrong verb form
push
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