Shops should not be allowed to sell food and drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Exactly
this
theory
that the scientist and psychoanalyst Immanuel Velikovsky touched upon in his 1950 bestseller "Worlds in Collision". According to the author, more than 3000 years ago, something huge hit Jupiter and formed a space object: this
object roamed around this
billiard table for a long time and at high speed caused many disasters and transformed into what we call Venus. Naturally, a large number of physicists and chemists immediately declined Velikovsky's theory
, at least because it violated Newton's law.The other skepticism
was more significant. It was said that the planets have a different Change the spelling
scepticism
composition
, because of which Venus could not be part of Jupiter. Fix the agreement mistake
compositions
However
, no one
has finally
been able to refute this
theory
, as well as to prove it.
About these discussions
many of you might already be familiarAdd a comma
,discussions
, especially
about the Big Bang Change preposition
with, especially
Theory
. Theory
explains how the whole Add an article
The theory
universe
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was born
born
from tiny Add a missing verb
was born
dence
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dense
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particles
particle
after Fix the agreement mistake
particles
its
explosion. Correct pronoun usage
their
This
universe
constantly expanding and cooling. But what if this
"big bang", in accordance with theory
suggested in 2001, appeared after Correct article usage
the theory
massive
collision ? -Based on Correct article usage
a massive
this
theory
, earlier there were two universes, which for some reasons
collided and, Fix the agreement mistake
reason
as a result
, our universe
was created.
Expansion
of the Correct article usage
The expansion
Universe
explains that there are many these kind
of universes like ours. These universes gradually hit each other in Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
the
space which follows with their expansion. Correct article usage
apply
However
, no one
said that one
day our universe
might collide with other one
and new
habitable platform will be created.
Black hole. Everyone knows what Correct article usage
a new
does
it mean at least from books of physics or films Unnecessary verb
apply
such
as "Interstellar". Black Hole this
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
spatial
location, which has Correct article usage
a spatial
such
incredibly immense gravitational force, which is not allowing the light to escape. For that reason, these kings
of Correct your spelling
kinds
holes
are absorbing everything around them. Often these holes
are former huge stars that have collapsed at extreme density during supernova explosions.
So, we figured out black holes
, but the
nature tent to show us its perfect symmetry in all aspects of life. There is something controversial… and if there are black Correct article usage
apply
holes
, why not let the white people have the opposite effect? If black holes
are capable of absorbing everything around them, then
, logically, there must be objects that, on the contrary
, pushing
everything away. Maybe that’s why we’ve never seen them before, it is simply impossible to get close to them.Wrong verb form
push
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