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Your Friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice write a letter ?

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Dear Jason, After reading your message from
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 week, I am very happy to hear that you are considering
to learn
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 how to drive. I have been driving for about 10 years now
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 I can certainly give you a few pointers.
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 with, driving is becoming a very essential skill for our generation. Learning how to drive opens up another mode of transportation for your commute and generally, faster than the bus.
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, meeting and hanging out with friends and family
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 becomes more accessible. To properly learn how to drive, I will recommend the 9-1-1 driving school. They are a
family owned
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 company and
employs
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 very experienced instructors. They are kind and helpful towards
the
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beginners. One
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 piece of personal
advise
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 I would like to give is to perfect how to parallel park. In my opinion,
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 is the single most useful driving skill you require in Seattle. I am sure that you will
appreaciate
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appreciate
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 new skill in your life and I wish you the best
for
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 your new
endeavor
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. Yours truly,
Samvid
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David
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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