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Many of the problems that people are experiencing in today’s world are due to the fact that we have a very sedentary lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In spite of the increasing numbers of gyms and physical
fitness
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 centres, many
people
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 are involved in a way of living
that is
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 sedentary in the modern world these days. In
this
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 essay, I am going to elaborate on the
problems
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 related to
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lifestyle
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 and give solutions.
Firstly
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, a significant problem associated with leading an inactive
lifestyle
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 is the risk it poses to
health
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.it can result
into
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 obesity which is a major disadvantage.
Such
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people
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 tend to deposit excessive fat in the body and
thus
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 causing
problems
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.
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, cancers that can be breast and other types of malignant tumours.
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, they are prone to diabetes.
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, it can cause depression because of isolation and poor social interaction combined with low mood, decreased muscle strength,
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problems
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 involving back pain and osteoarthritis due to lack of exercise (bones tend to get weaker). To solve
this
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 problem,
government
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the government
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 can embark on campaigns to increase
the
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awareness and promote the benefits of an active
lifestyle
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. If more
people
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 are educated,
this
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 will in turn encourage them to take the extra steps needed to improve their
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lifestyle
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.
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,
affordable
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 gym membership would go a long way in attracting
people
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 to engage in physical
fitness
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 activities,
thus
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 improving their
health
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. Provision of
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the gym
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gym
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gyms
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 in
work places
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workplaces
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 to encourage employees to keep fit.
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,
people
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have
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who have
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 to stay working for 8 to 12 hours on the computer in the workplace can have breaks at work (to participate in
fitness
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 activities) to reduce the sedentary hours spent in front of the screen. In conclusion, due to
advancement
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 in technology in the modern days in which we live, there is
an
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 growing increase in the number of
people
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 living a sedentary
lifestyle
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 and
this
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 has been found to be associated with
health
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problems
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 which can be avoided by encouraging
people
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 to do physical
fitness
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 activities through
provision
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the provision
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 of affordable gym membership and
health
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 awareness campaign.
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