Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
there is no doubt that these days there are a lot of high levels of
sugar
in many products
. the question is is it a good way to make sugary food and drinks more expensive to make society eat less
Change the quantifier
fewer
sugar
?. in this
essay I am going to talk about it and give my opinion on the matter.
to begin
with, sugar
is an important source of energy for the human body. However
, eating a lot of sugar
can harm more than good. I agree with making the products
more expensive to encourage people
to eat less of them. But I think there are many ways to convince people
to eat less sugar
and be healthier. For instance
, make more advertisements about the diseases that sugar
can do. Also
, writing about it in social media because social media becoming so effective nowadays for people
. Reminding young people
and kids about the serious damage that sugary can made is a very important way.
Moreover
, making sugar
products
more expensive going really makes our behaviours on
shopping better. How?, Change preposition
apply
for example
, if I see healthy products
cheaper than any other one I am going to buy for sure healthy food. Day after day it will make me love food with less sugar
and improve my health and my brain.
to sum up, it is a good idea to make sugar
products
more expensive to encourage society to eat less sugar
, However
, is better to make people
and especially our kids about what sugar
will do to their bodies and brain.Submitted by Shaima alrahbi on
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