SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT ADVERTISING IS EXTREMELY SUCCESSFUL AT PERSUADING US TO BUY THINGS. OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT ADVERTISING IS SO COMMON THAT WE NO LONGER PAY ATTENTION TO IT
While some
people
argue that commercials is
highly effective at convincing us to purchase their products, others take the view that advertising is so frequent which made it less effective Change the verb form
are
on
their decisions. In my opinion, advertising is influencing more than before.
On one side of the argument, there are Change preposition
in
people
who hold the opinion that there is
enormous advertisements on many platforms Change the verb form
are
such
televisions
, smartphone applications and radios. Change preposition
as televisions
As a result
, people
feel tedious about
these adverts and do not like to watch Change preposition
with
it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
For example
, it
someone Correct your spelling
if
watching
a show or series Wrong verb form
watches
then
an advert is presented, that individual will engage with other things till the show come back. Replace the word
than
Moreover
, some advertisements are ver
long in a way Correct your spelling
very
that is
annoying which leaves a bad feeling to
the product being promoted.
Despite the above arguments, I am of the view that commercials are very convincing. It is the best route Change preposition
about
to
the consumer. Change preposition
for
Furthermore
, in
these days Change preposition
apply
advertisement
can be seen in Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
social
media Add an article
the social
application
. Companies use popular Fix the agreement mistake
applications
individual
to promote their products or use the pages of Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
the
famous Correct article usage
apply
people
to let as many as
follower see their Correct word choice
apply
product
. Fix the agreement mistake
products
Also
, advert producers have a special way to attract the consumer like they present a
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apply
humours
seen.
In conclusion, while both views Change the wording
humour
senses of humour
touches of humour
commonly
held in society, I believe that Add a missing verb
are commonly
commercial
are one of the most effective Fix the agreement mistake
commercials
way
to make Change to a plural noun
ways
people
know about the product and grab their attention. However
, many individuals see that advertisements are no longer attractive as before because of its
long duration and Correct pronoun usage
their
the
boring content.Correct article usage
apply
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