Too many big cities in the world are increasing in size. What is the problem associated with it? What are the solutions

Metropolitan
cities
have been experiencing an upsurge in
population
throughout the world. Increased
rate
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of crime and depletion of natural
resources
are the leading causes associated with the
problem
.
This
essay intends to discuss possible solutions to mitigate these problems.
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increased rate of migration of common people to big
cities
directly or indirectly promotes the rising criminal activities. As people with criminal
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are always looking for opportunities and can easily hide
themselves
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under the umbrella of
over crowded
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overcrowded
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places.
For instance
, big
cities
with
over
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population
become
natural
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target
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of criminals and it becomes very difficult to organise peace in these regions.
However
, to address
this
problem
government
can organise the
cities
by building organised structures and connectivity to properly disperse the
employment
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population
in the neighbouring
cities
.
This
will provide opportunities
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people to travel and find work in different areas other than one big city.
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major
problem
has
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been faced by major
cities
is the depletion of natural
resources
. To fulfil the demand
of
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basic necessities like water and food
government
has to provide
the
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supplies from nearby regions which can deplete their reserves of natural
resources
too.
For instance
, to provide electricity to every house
of
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Delhi
government
borrows electricity from neighbouring states and sometimes small
cities
are affected
in
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this
process. To mitigate
this
problem
government
must provide a limited supply of
the
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resources
so that no one can abuse the supply and every person gets
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proportion.
Hence
, maintain the equilibrium of nature. In conclusion,
government
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needs to take specific steps to organise infrastructure and evenly disperse the
population
on the basis of economic activity.
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