Too many big cities in the world are increasing in size. What is the problem associated with it? What are the solutions
Metropolitan
cities
have been experiencing an upsurge in population
throughout the world. Increased rate
of crime and depletion of natural Fix the agreement mistake
rates
resources
are the leading causes associated with the problem
. This
essay intends to discuss possible solutions to mitigate these problems.
With the
increased rate of migration of common people to big Change preposition
The
cities
directly or indirectly promotes the rising criminal activities. As people with criminal intend
are always looking for opportunities and can easily hide Replace the word
intent
themselves
under the umbrella of Remove the pronoun
apply
over crowded
places. Correct your spelling
overcrowded
For instance
, big cities
with over
Correct your spelling
overpopulation
population
become natural
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the natural
target
of criminals and it becomes very difficult to organise peace in these regions. Fix the agreement mistake
targets
However
, to address this
problem
government
can organise the cities
by building organised structures and connectivity to properly disperse the employment
Add a hyphen
employment-population
population
in the neighbouring cities
. This
will provide opportunities to
people to travel and find work in different areas other than one big city.
Change preposition
for
Second
major Add an article
A second
The second
problem
has
been faced by major Correct pronoun usage
that has
cities
is the depletion of natural resources
. To fulfil the demand of
basic necessities like water and food Change preposition
for
government
has to provide the
supplies from nearby regions which can deplete their reserves of natural Correct article usage
apply
resources
too. For instance
, to provide electricity to every house of
Delhi Change preposition
in
government
borrows electricity from neighbouring states and sometimes small cities
are affected in
Change preposition
by
this
process. To mitigate this
problem
government
must provide a limited supply of the
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apply
resources
so that no one can abuse the supply and every person gets equal
proportion. Correct article usage
an equal
Hence
, maintain the equilibrium of nature.
In conclusion, government
needs to take specific steps to organise infrastructure and evenly disperse the Add an article
the government
population
on the basis of economic activity.Submitted by jaspreetramgarhia901 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite