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In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials(eg,paper, glass, can). What are the reasons and solutions?

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Due to not experiencing environmental damage and demolition, countries must recycle huge amounts of waste while not adequate recycling happens in many countries. In
this
 essay, we will look through the causes and try to mention a few solutions. Mostly in developing countries, there is not enough budget to assure the provision of particular systems with predetermined processes for recycling
wastes
,
such
 as papers, glasses, cans and bottles. Governments claim that
this
 procedure costs huge expenditure that exceeds the budget allocated.
For instance
, in our country, Iran,
Government
 has made no useful decision to avoid demolishing of environment and
instead
 setting up more factories and companies to produce more goods made up of plastics and paper poses more environmental risks and as the result, you can see huge mountains of waste near jungles or on the coastline.
In addition
,
people
 themselves do not care about separating these from the other litter they generate.
Therefore
,
this
 generates a huge cost for the
government
. In order to mitigate
this
 ongoing and pervasive problem I believe that
government
 should impose higher taxes to have more money to spend on the recycling industry. Advertisements
also
 can help and make
people
 wary of how to separate the
wastes
 they generate and how it would be beneficial to buy goods produced by recycled
wastes
,
such
 as bottles and containers. In my view, it should be helpful to educate
people
 by holding various colourful festivals and workshops
in addition
 to teaching students and the very young in their schools in what way
this
 helps conservation and provision of the
next
 generation's resources. In conclusion, after
this
 essay has manifested the above-mentioned points I should iterate that
besides
 the
government
's responsibility for allocating a particular budget for
this
,
people
 have their own responsibility for preserving the environment of these
wastes
.
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